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Saturday, February 16, 2013
“to write is human, to edit is divine”
The above quote is from Stephen King. It came to mind when I read
the following ad last week. I have replaced the product’s name because I am not
promoting this product. That is not my intent. I wanted to emphasize the
importance of proofreading and editing in regard to any and all manner of
There is a problem with this ad copy.
The challenge is for you to find it.
How sharp are your editing chops?
This Productis all-natural, non-prescription men’s supplement for prostate
health. Now men no longer have to just accept the issues that comes with an
aging prostate. If you are over 40 and are urinating more frequently during the
day, experiencing a weaker urine stream, constantly waking up at
night to urinate, or having trouble emptying your bladder completely thenThis Productcan help. It contains 600mg of Beta-Sitosterol and other plant
sterols, vitamin D, and other 11 healthy minerals such as selenium
and zinc. All the ingredients help support a healthy prostitute for men and can
help relieve the inconveniences caused by an aging prostate. This Producthas long been one of the most trusted natural supplement for men’s
prostate health. It has sold over 5 million bottles during the last 10 years
and continues to be a top seller. Leave a comment if you find the problem(s).
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