The above quote is from Stephen King. It came to mind when I read the following ad last week. I have replaced the product’s name because I am not promoting this product. That is not my intent. I wanted to emphasize the importance of proofreading and editing in regard to any and all manner of writing.
There is a problem with this ad copy.
The challenge is for you to find it.
How sharp are your editing chops?
This Product
This Product is all-natural, non-prescription men’s supplement for prostate
health. Now men no longer have to just accept the issues that comes with an
aging prostate.
If you are over 40 and are urinating more frequently during the day, experiencing a weaker urine stream, constantly waking up at night to urinate, or having trouble emptying your bladder completely then This Product can help.
It contains 600mg of Beta-Sitosterol and other plant sterols, vitamin D, and other 11 healthy minerals such as selenium and zinc. All the ingredients help support a healthy prostitute for men and can help relieve the inconveniences caused by an aging prostate.
This Product has long been one of the most trusted natural supplement for men’s prostate health. It has sold over 5 million bottles during the last 10 years and continues to be a top seller.
Leave a comment if you find the problem(s).
If you are over 40 and are urinating more frequently during the day, experiencing a weaker urine stream, constantly waking up at night to urinate, or having trouble emptying your bladder completely then This Product can help.
It contains 600mg of Beta-Sitosterol and other plant sterols, vitamin D, and other 11 healthy minerals such as selenium and zinc. All the ingredients help support a healthy prostitute for men and can help relieve the inconveniences caused by an aging prostate.
This Product has long been one of the most trusted natural supplement for men’s prostate health. It has sold over 5 million bottles during the last 10 years and continues to be a top seller.
Leave a comment if you find the problem(s).
Happy writing.
DB
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